Ruth and Hilary: Sweet Surprise/Sweet Sixteen

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Title: Sweet Surprise, or Bear-Naked Frottage + Sweet Sixteen
Author: Ruth and Hilary
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Qui/Obi
Warnings: Incestuous roleplay, sexual use of stuffed bears, crossdressing.









Author's e-mail, web site and/or LJ id:

Ruth: telesilla, telesilla @ gmail.com
Hilary: padawanhilary, padawanhilary @ hotmail.com

Link to story: http://www.masterapprentice.org/archive/s/sweet_surprise.html and http://www.masterapprentice.org/archive/s/sweet_sixteen.html

Reasons for recommending: Um...they're hot. But it's like, I laughed when Ruth and Hil first wrote these. I read them thinking they were going to be humor. And they're not. They're serious and they're so fucking hot. Roleplay is hard to write well, but this is an excellent example of how to do it. The slipping in and out of roles really works.

Quote from story:

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The naked hunger in her voice ripped under Qui-Gon's skin and he moved one hand down to hold her slim hip. All it ever took for either of them at this stage of this game were four little words. Daddy held them back as long as he could, stretching the moment out until his whole body burned with the need to come. Then, looking down at the insanely perverse view beneath him, he spoke those words. "Come for Daddy, Princess."

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More: Guh. Just...guh, man. So. Fucking. Hot.